All Comments on 'The Bureau of Pleasure Control Ch. 09'

Great story as always, but at the moment I'm curious about Officer Deacon's fate.

Please tell me officer Deacon is okay!

Fun plot twist, though, with Kirsten getting the wife into the months of chastity and then this competitor starting up.

The thought of a start up with a lock on my balls is terrifying.

This is such a compelling story! You really have a gift. If this were a novel I wouldn't be able to put it down. I can't wait to read more!

Your creativity is amazing.

I enjoy denial stories with some humiliation, you take it to another level. Well Done!

Another intriguing twist, Officer Deacon's absence hovering in the background, while male Officer Brixton, heavy footed idiot or Calvin's stoodge? Your wonderful skill developing story lines, plotting at its' best keeps us in thrall for the next chapter.