All Comments on 'The Business Conference'

Please add another chapter or two! Want to know how the remainder of the conference went😍

This was good. Would love to see a continuation and encounter with both women at the same time.

All right, you had a nice set-up and you passed. I really expected some commentary to the women about the pig and a plan to set him up for devastation.

No, the pig doesn't get to watch. More something of a professional devastation.

You foreshadowed something and never answered it.

Very nicely done.

I liked that your main character focused on the women vs himself. I would have preferred a little more development before the initial sex scene but that’s quibbling.

I also liked the details of the conference. It made the whole story more realistic. Either you have real life experience with them or you did good research before writing.

Thanks for the story. 5*

Fine premise.

But the sex starts too abruptly and rushes to conclusions.

Four stars.