All Comments on 'The Cabin by the Lake Day 01'

- did Mick pull "out just in time, just in time to squirt thick strands of warm cum all over her wet pussy" when he shortly before had decided that "he would wait and fill her with so much cum it would be running down her legs before she could reach the toilet"???

Why not post this in Non-Erotic?

So easy to criticize....perhaps rather than posting comments anonymously, you would like to give your authors name so we can all see your work and how a story is meant to be written and qualify as erotic.

I write soley for my own enjoyment like I imagine a lot of people on here do. I'm not fussed about what everyone thinks of my work. If someone enjoys it, so much the better

Bottom line....if you see one of my stories posted....move on and read something else