All Comments on 'The Camera Man'

hmmm very good and interesting, I hope you continue part 2.

Great Story!!!

This was a highly charged and highly erotic story. The scene between Mistress Sadie and Justin was very hot.

I was surprised and disappointed that Justin wasn't lured into chastity and and that you didn't play that dynamic out for a few pages. Don't get me wrong, he had a great experience and the opportunity for a great girlfriend, I just really wasn't expecting the soft ending so soon.

Thank you so much for writing and posting here. I hope that I see more from you.

Really well done. You created an incredibly hot scene while creating honest vulnerability in the ending. Leaves me intrigued and interested to read more about these two. Can’t think of a better compliment than that to give. Thanks for sharing your story with us!

Wow that was a very hot scene. I love the vulnerability of the characters and how the hints of romance never fully revealed themselves until the ending. The subtlety of it was perfect. It leaves me very interested to get to know more about these characters and how they manage a complicated relationship.

Wow that was a very hot scene. I love the vulnerability of the characters and how the hints of romance never fully revealed themselves until the ending. The subtlety of it was perfect. It leaves me very interested to get to know more about these characters and how they manage a complicated relationship.

Thank you to everyone that has favorited this story or left feedback. Writing erotic fiction like this has been a hobby of mine for a few years now but in general has been a back-and-forth experience between myself and a friend. We often collaborate with one another when writing erotic fiction stories. This story in particular was one I wrote for him and was originally intended as a stand-alone story.

@perroCastidad: I hadn't intended to write a part 2 but I've received such a great response from this story that I am toying with the idea of continuing it.

@ Failedscout: Originally I had intended on having the initial scene between Justin and Mistress Sadie being much shorter and then instead dragging out the long-term chastity experience. Though as I was writing it and getting into the mind-set of the characters I felt this direction felt more believable. This was Justin's first experience with anything outside his comfort zone and as we saw at the beginning of the story he was highly skeptical of the whole femdom situation to begin with. It felt only right for him to decide it was too much for him too quickly.

@ Mc1sucks: I've been thinking a lot about how the relationship between Justin and Mistress Sadie might go from here. Justin hasn't been in a lot of relationships to date and certainly not one where his girlfriend spends 3-5 hours a week dominating other men. Trying to have a romantic relationship with her while continuing to be her dedicated camera man, watching and recording her doing unimaginable things to other men will start to have an effect on him. How will he keep his work life separate from his private life?

All in all, after reading these comments and replying to them I have become inspired and believe I will begin working on a sequel for this story. Watching the dynamic between these two characters grow will be fun!

Thank you to everyone that has favorited this story or left feedback. Writing erotic fiction like this has been a hobby of mine for a few years now but in general has been a back-and-forth experience between myself and a friend. We often collaborate with one another when writing erotic fiction stories. This story in particular was one I wrote for him and was originally intended as a stand-alone story.

@perroCastidad: I hadn't intended to write a part 2 but I've received such a great response from this story that I am toying with the idea of continuing it.

@ Failedscout: Originally I had intended on having the initial scene between Justin and Mistress Sadie being much shorter and then instead dragging out the long-term chastity experience. Though as I was writing it and getting into the mind-set of the characters I felt this direction felt more believable. This was Justin's first experience with anything outside his comfort zone and as we saw at the beginning of the story he was highly skeptical of the whole femdom situation to begin with. It felt only right for him to decide it was too much for him too quickly.

@ Mc1sucks: I've been thinking a lot about how the relationship between Justin and Mistress Sadie might go from here. Justin hasn't been in a lot of relationships to date and certainly not one where his girlfriend spends 3-5 hours a week dominating other men. Trying to have a romantic relationship with her while continuing to be her dedicated camera man, watching and recording her doing unimaginable things to other men will start to have an effect on him. How will he keep his work life separate from his private life?

All in all, after reading these comments and replying to them I have become inspired and believe I will begin working on a sequel for this story. Watching the dynamic between these two characters grow will be fun!