All Comments on 'The Cameraman Ch. 02'

A sadly average number of spelling errors, but worse is the incorrect use of pompous phrases. Good story, though, just needs editing.

I wonder if that's all he breaks when he gets up and realizes you are abusing, degrading and humiliating him? Cracked ribs make a good reminder not to treat people worse than you'd treat an animal.

Her college slut has yet to take a real man fucking and breeding. Your lovers wife needs to be bred by your slut slave and forced to have his baby. Your lover could provide more studs to fuck his wife, you, and the slave. So may things could be added. Very good, you had me leaking pre cum and hard as a rock.