All Comments on 'The Captain'

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Blovely4youBlovely4youabout 6 years ago
Just so you know

You changed from third person to first person on the first page. I liked the first few paragraphs though!

AlaninSFAlaninSFabout 6 years ago
Emotional

Good story. Write more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Nooooo!!!! I need this to have a happy ending :(

I loved this, it’s written beautifully.

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