All Comments on 'The Car Boot Bet'

This was awesome! Really makes me want to read the rest of your work to see what all they get up to!

Kind of hard to read, like reading a Jigsaw puzzle. The story has potential If if You can figure out the Piece, and their even playing such a one side game while someone else is fucking your girlfriend??

Awesome work, really enjoyed the 'game' element and the taboo nature