All Comments on 'The Caretaker of Paradise'

Really tough job/life he has. Just keep writing. Descriptions of sex scenes well done.

Very nicely done. Well written and only a few minor incorrect words but for the price I'm definitely not complaining. Really enjoyed the MC's breaching of the fourth wall for asides to the audience. Keep up the good work. 5 stars and looking forward to more adventures.

OG

I enjoyed this story, hopefully the first of many installments

This is a fine set up ... but please, don't stretch it out to be a long series, like "Love Boat" or "Fantasy Island."