All Comments on 'The Carnal Remedy'

Great story--great characters--abrupt ending.

Just was in hospital and had nurse wanna suck me off. I was too scared and thought it was unprofessional. Had I read this before I may have went for it

I really enjoyed this and didn't think the ending was abrupt at all! It was perfectly appropriate. I loved that you brought back Bobby's catch phrase. In my mind, he and Joshua said it together.

It was both hot and sweet. Thank you for writing this!

I loved it, please write more :) Hard to find a story of this calibre, I'll eagerly read anything you want to write, bravo!

I would love to read more about these two!

GREAT STORY!!!

First story I've actually read on Literotica - This one was listed in the "similar stories" for my own work while I was reviewing it. Not bad at all. My only complaint? The abrupt changes in attitude and demeanor from Robert were, perhaps, a little TOO abrupt. He swung wildly from angry to compliant to childish and back again very quickly. Perhaps that was intentional, but it just threw me off a bit. Aside from that, a wonderful read. I may look into your other work.

I didn't mind the change in bobby's demeanour as it went on,to me it showed his frustration, reluctance, acceptance and bliss. what I would like to have know is if he was this his first with a man, it didn't need it, but gave me ideas on how he would become later on. enough here for a second part

It was so heavy when it started out, but left me chuckling in the end. Loved the characters; great chemistry between them. Super hot and super cute!!

Love it!!!!