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by magicwindow_6

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The_WatermanThe_Watermanalmost 6 years ago
Not much depth

It is a very thin story, touching only on hi lights. It left me wanting more detail, more depth. You are a good writer, but I feel you could reveal more about your characters and their reasons for being where they are and why. More please

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