All Comments on 'The Challenge'

he needs to finally get free and get a gun shoot all the bastards that used him especially his whore lara shoot her in the cunt

I would love to cut Lara’s clit and pussy lips off and then feed them to her!

Great story explaining why the patriarchy is in place and should stay that way. Women can’t handle any form of power and this story gives a great example.

There was a lot of good potential in this story. Unfortunately the frequent spelling errors got annoying. Also, the story contained the sort of dark over the top violence that is not part of real bdsm and would have warranted a content warning. It's really not everyone's cup of tea. If you had warned ahead about sheer violence, you'd probably get a better rating.

You have a lot of potential here. Please get an editor to clean it up and repost it.

There is nothing about this story that is erotic in any way, shape, or form. Nothing.

slave sex at its best

this is extremely fucked up. cant even get hard to this torture.

And will they murder him? If not, they go to prison for 25 years and hopefully take the author with them!

HE NEEDS PAY BACK