All Comments on 'The Challenge'

Holy fuck, cb.

Entertaining, and enjoyable.

The writing was decent (a few mistakes that should have been caught in a proofread, and speaking purely for myself I hate present tense stories), the story was good, but the ending sucked. "And then I woke up" is one of my least favorite literary devices of all time. And tacking on "or did she?" doesn't make it any better for me.

Overall good, but not great for me.

I’ll have what she’s having

With every story you release, you solidify why you're my favourite writer on here.

This is absolutely a dream and/or a nightmare for many women. Exciting!

I agree with Dandyman that "it was only a dream" endings are generally terrible; only really worked for Lewis Carroll. But this ending is ambiguous. It would be fun to read another chapter in which she learns that the app was right and Katlin and the urgent care center that Katlin mentioned is really another rougher bar.

Part 2 please

This definitely needs another chapter! There's still so much time left in the challenge! And I need to know if this was all her friends doings.