All Comments on 'The Chandelier Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

I really love to read alpha dog and underdog type stories. I am a sucker for these types of stories where the underdog character captures the whole big compassionate heart of the alpha dog character. Romance rules always. So yes I certainly derived a bunch of satisfaction from your marvellously written chapter one; I hope we don’t have to wait too long to experience your chapter two. For sure you have a five star story…

Dare

Ps I found it interesting that Astria shut down round two because she was afraid of internal damage from future activities that night. It contrasts mightily with other stories that have round two,three,four, five,six, seven, eight, nine and ten all within the next hour, I found it very refreshing that she said no more for tonight.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Excellent start to this series. The situation and the characters feel real. Which only adds to the very hot and detailed sex scene. Definitely looking forward to part two.

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