All Comments on 'The Change in Melissa Ch. 05'
by MarriedMelissa
- 13 Comments
Anonymousalmost 12 years agowell my heart goes out to your husband for the life he wasted on a pig like you, as far as your stories go there like your life a waste.
double_t_sptnalmost 12 years agoreally you tell stories like a wimp of a husband. Please tell me your not a wimp posing as a Female
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoMelissa or whover you are This is not erotic at all Don't you get it ? One more thing.Why are you married? Have you ever asked that question? Genetic my ass
cantbuymyalmost 12 years agoyou have your own style and story line - not many like it from your stats but keep writing and your story telling will get better. i will drop in from time to time to see what you are doing; but your main characters are not very endearing and that seems to be a problem.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoHer husband heard her fuckig another man for 97 minutes. He heard everything, every word, every moan, every name. It was from her cell. She did not shower after sex. There is zero possibility to cover her actions up, so why try? Why not let her have her divorce, half the marital assets and both carry on? Why does she want to be married when she has no love or respect for her husband?
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoBOTH WHORES WHO WILL SOON BE DIVORCED OR CATCH AIDS AN DIE ,SERIOUSLY WHO WOULD WANT A SLUT AS A MOTHER ,THER KIDS WILL BE WITH THERE FATHERS SOON AN BANNED FROM WHORES
Lickideesplitalmost 12 years agoIt seems that MarMel tries to get from one sex scene to the next (nothing wrong with erotica in LIT) in the most expeditious manner possible. MarMel does pretty well in those (fast to the sex, but the 'Girls' are not exactly reticent!). However, the connective tissue (story between the fucks and sucks and licks) is given short shrift.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoThe Stupid husband is going to believe the Stupid slut.
Stupid
adgeonalmost 12 years agobut this chapter was a good read. Thanks.
imready2almost 10 years agoI have read the previous 4 chapters with great pleasure. Number 5 has topped them all... yes even the girl on girl! The detailed description of the love making and having the husband listen to it.Oh gawd! I even imagined if I was the husband and I got even more aroused. This does not overlook how great it would of feltreplacing Chris and licking Robin's sweet pussy, then sliding my cock into her from behind while holding her massive breasts! I have to go or should I say cum now!
Thank you
26thNCabout 5 years agoRobin's husband was right. She is a fucking slut, just like the whore Melissa.
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