All Comments on 'The Cheaters Ch. 01'

Superb, i like the way it's heading. Story was kinda short, but still good. Looking forward to next part. I like that Finn was apologetic at first but still demanded the husband to have his wife call him lol

Wife should dump the pathetic sissy wimp and move on with a real man. Beyond stupid!

Boring 1☆

Chapter 1, but only 1500 words? Pro-tip: If you've written 1500 words and the story isn't complete, don't post, keep writing.

You need an editor who actually speaks English fluently if you're going to post on English based web sites.

Now what are you going to do about it? Will you continue to let them both lie to you and treat you with such disrespect or will you do something about it?

Fetish-cuck tales don't have a chance to get a good readers evaluation, in this LW category. Try the Fetish.

F-E-T-I-S-H...

Finally, a very short cuck semi story.

Yes two lie to their best friend. That's what I delt with. I burned the bitch bastard. I gave my ex-wifes lover my exfriends wife the proof that she needed to divorce him.

A score this low seems could be a clue to what subject people don't like!

Spoiler Alert...it gets worse in the next chapters!