All Comments on 'The Cheryl Cummings Story Ch. 08'

I rerally like the story, as well as where it seems to be going, but there is far too much of the preliminaries. Let's get to some more action. To have a whole submition that is nonerotic is too much. Lets turn up the heat.

you hav me hooked on it mate...every mornin the first thing i do is come check for new chapters.... but come on mate... you have to got to increase the length.... pleaaaase

Love the series and look fwd to each days installment. It's nice to see the slow build up instead of the usual two paragrapghs and the clothes are flying off. And I love the idea of Belinda whooping Cheryl's white behind :-)

I am really enjoying your series. However, you are a bigger tease than my wife! Looking forward to the next chapters.

Enjoy your series very much. Love the slow build up.

For a change i really like the slow build and the anticipation. I agree the parts are a bit short though. Keep up the good work, very literotic indeed.

Love the story, keep it up!

crazy!!