All Comments on 'The Children of Freedom Ch. 01'

It's an erotic tour de farce, quite enjoyable. An editor could help correct some typos misspellings, and homophone word switches, but most of the grammar, syntax, etc. are pretty good.

Where do I sign up for an audition with the Children. A delightful story, and one that - I hope - left the door open for a sequel. I really enjoyed this. Five stars!!