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All Comments on 'The Chinese Lantern Bride Ch. 01'

by AlessaRose

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LunaScarletLunaScarletover 2 years ago
Keep going!

You're doing great! Can't wait for the next chapters!

U4ia99U4ia99over 2 years ago

Keep going. It is a good premise

des911des911over 2 years ago

Good start. You have my attention and curiosity about how it will turn out.

Looking forward to the next part

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Promising

AlessaRoseAlessaRoseover 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you guys so much for the feedback, and for being so encouraging! It means a lot, and definitely motivates me to keep writing. (: I've submitted the next two chapters, and they should pop up within the next week.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This is amazing!!! I love that you can’t really tell what Time period this is taking place in. Is it the current world? Is it the 1800s? That keeps things interesting

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I'm an aspiring writer looking to mesh two of my passions together - eroticism, and storytelling. I'm pretty new to writing erotic literature, and would appreciate any feedback. Thank you for taking the time to read my humble little works and giving me the chance to share a pi...