All Comments on 'The Chinese Lantern Bride Ch. 03'

Thank you for sharing your talents with us. I understand choosing an earlier era to justify the premise of a ‘mail order bride’, however most of the story reads more contemporary. Dialogue, actions, manners, and especially the clothing mentioned, all sound very modern rather than appropriate to the time period. Just as an example, even the poorest of women would have worn multiple layers under her dress or the dress just wouldn’t fit properly. A minor detail, yes, yet these are the details that together lend verisimilitude to the work as a whole. I offer this as a constructive suggestion. Again, thank you for an entertaining read.

Loving the interaction here. The pretend love hate from her as she sinks deeper into the rabbit hole

@nthisiastic

Ahhh, you caught me out. Admittedly, I'm not very good at period writing, and didn't really do sufficient research into time period to emulate it properly. I'll bear this in mind for future chapters / stories. In the meantime, I apologise if this took away from the story. I'll do better next time!

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I appreciate it!

@Masterfuljim

Ah, thank you! I'm glad you like it. (: Thank you so much for reading and for leaving a comment!

I’m obsessed keep it going