All Comments on 'The Chosen One Ch. 02'

Ok 5 stars. I freaking love this story. Kevin Jr. has a mouth on her and she's not even here yet. I wanna beg for the next chapter, but I wanna be patient as well. Dude you nailed it.

Great as always. The only down side is the wait for the next chapter.

have read all stories with Kevin and his pals.... great story here and cant wait for the next chapter .. ill be sad when it comes to an end .....

Richard

now just write a lot faster damn it - hugs to you my dear friend

Nothing like a good story! Can't wait to see what Laura will say next!

YES, YES, YES!!!! I'M LOVING THE NEW STORY. KEEP THOSE CHAPTERS COMING.

I got here. I know took me long enough but hey I waited on you so it's only fair you wait on me......hehehe. Great chapter, you revealed a lot without revealing to much. Now all I think about is reading the next chapter......I'll leave a longer comment on it cause I'm going to chapter 3 right now

i've read storie & this is the first time i have ever commented. this truly is a work of art

great story, but i disagree with your comment, sum are naturally born nymphomanaics :p lol but i do agree that every chapter doesnt need sex scene, but again im not critisizing your story or writing, just your comment :p :)

I think Laura must have some unusual hormones flowing from her pregnancy by a were wolf. They are causing occasional aggressive mood swings. And I love Kristine's fierce love for her husband, and her possessive protectiveness toward his team. These council members owe these ladies respect for their influence in Kevin's life.

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I am finding this one of the better Nonhuman stories I've read... Very interesting. I am looking forward to the other chapters.