The Christmas Market

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"Thanks, Robert." I glace at the dials and then stare out the window. Maybe Father Christmas just brought me a gift.

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Thank you for staying with Kristina to the end of her story. If you liked this story, please consider reading my other works.

I consider feedback a gift, so I endeavor to read your comments and PMs. I hope you all have a Happy Holidays.

~mfan2112

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

My first time reading your works; really enjoyed the story! Thanks for writing for us!

I'll be checking out more of your stories.

AFoolRushesInAFoolRushesInalmost 3 years ago

A very nice story. It reminds me of how I met my wife, though not in such an exotic locale. But having been to Bavaria, the people are real.

It would be worth further exploring Kristina's relationship. Perhaps a trip to Austria?

Payne_HallPayne_Hallover 3 years ago
Very nice!

There’s more of you guys on here, too!

I know I’m late on the draw, but it was gorgeous writing. Any tense problems were small enough that they would be easy fixes and, for me at least, were easily overshadowed. Thank you for writing it :)

Ravey19Ravey19over 3 years ago
Bit Late But A Great Story

Loved it and didn't notice anything untoward re tenses. Might have been a couple of things but not serious enough to annoy me or to rmember them.

Really liked the way you brought her German / Austrian ancestry and language into it.

Thought sex was a little too early but it is difficult to introduce a suitable time lag into a contest as the stories have to be relatively short.

Well done. 5 stars.

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