All Comments on 'The Christmas Wish'

can't wait for part 2!

Please consider finding an editor.

Many of these people use fake names and I'm okay with it because its their privacy. If you waste the time finding an editor on a story you are not getting paid to write then you are wasting your time with the fools who are asking for you to get one. How about you paying for an editor. I mean damn @Bigfundrew, can you spare some change? It cost you nothing to read and when someone write their own book or short-story they pay an editor before it gets published.

Great start - try to be careful with grammatical errors, but can't wait for more.

Cant wait for more