All Comments on 'The Chronicles of Frank'

Your story line wasn't bad though it needs work. However, it was hard to follow a story when the spelling and grammar are so bad.

Though your story is set in Canada and the place names are correct, it appears you are not a native English speaker. Please get an editor and use your spell checker and grammar checker.

You have some promise but will see only low marks without some improvement.

Word order reversal, wrong verb tense, incorrect use of plural words, missing words, incomplete sentences, this story had all of it! MUCH work needed to edit story into an understandable story.

I agree with the other two reviews.Please consider adult classes in creative writing,and find someone to edit your stories.

That posting has to be some of the most pathetic writing I have ever seen. Pick a perspective, and stay with it. Pick a verb tense, and stay with it. Use spellcheck. Get an editor. And find a plot line which is actually plausible.

-- KK in Texas

Waibbe, you're getting hammered here by the usual English Major Maniacs who are unforgiving in their critique of you. I want to encourage you to write, and write better and better as you learn the ropes. I'm sure you'll have no shortage of tough, mean, downright ugly judges who'll allow you NO moment's rest until you achieve greatness. Ron