All Comments on 'The Claiming of Lynn'

I thoroughly enjoyed your work and I see you are a new writer on LIT. Welcome aboard! Can't wait to hear more of the story. Hurry up and write Chapter 2 please!

WELL DONE!

The Claiming of Lynn - Chapter One is a great story. Descriptions of ALL characters was so vivid, it was easy for me to form a mental image of them. I can offer only one suggestion. Personally, I felt the passage on Lynn's dancing could have been shorter. But, I'm just one of many who'll enjoy your story and others will surely disagree. It wasn't enough for me to vote the story anything other than a 5.

well written,sensual and hot...i enjoyed this more with each written word. Thank you for sharing this one and now...off to read on*smile* respectfully fan in Texas naynay