All Comments on 'The Closet Monster'

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Corpse_riderCorpse_rideralmost 13 years ago
Get back in that closet!

A good idea and title, but very poorly done. I was hoping for some supernatual incubus rape scene, but the clost monster just turns out to be a man, who gives Mindy one, then buggers off - and not even back to the closet at that. Huh!

RandomStorywriter01904RandomStorywriter01904over 10 years ago
Quite good but...

...the storyline was pretty poor. Seriously-he gives her one fuck session and walks off into the night? He could have at least given her a hope that he'd return and do her again. It's nothing a retry can't fix though, and it is a good plot. I hope you do an edited version-it might make you famous.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

lame and utterly rushed,

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