by Asira_T
Like the story. it hasn't turned into Bondage yet simply D/s. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Looking forward to see what happens next...and, yeah, I'm a little jealous of Oki...
Good intro to something I'm looking forward to reading. I like the pace and the cadence and the hints of what is to come, then the description of what comes. More please. 5*