All Comments on 'The Club'

Congratulations . I am very very happy for you

Female BDSM and not really a Lesbian Story!!! Not my type of reading for enjoyment & any follow up stories should be in BDSM.

A very good first story, well written, will keep a look out for any more of your stories in the future, would love to see this become an ongoing series.

I think this, if it's TBC (to be continued) then it should be put under the BDSM category with lesbian as a tag.

Please more!

Love your satiric sense of wit moving between sexual and non sexual themes. Had a very good flow and scenes like spilling the groceries and milk added so much. Dialogue could use a little better refinement but that will come as you observe people's speech patterns. Well done.