All Comments on 'The Club Pt. 01'

Thanks for writing ;)

Excellent writing!! Very hot story. Looking forward to reading more !!

Extraordinary! You have talent for heat— exquisite details, finely wrought sense imagery. Elegant, subtle, and very very hot. I cannot wait for the adventure to continue.

Hot and now I need to wake my husband

Really good, but could have been outstanding with a bit of proofreading. It was pretty disconcerting when Rose and Daphne turned into "two other men played with me"

I'm salivating wishing first to be her, then to be Luke. Being licked to orgasm is fantastic. But being able to use my lips and tongue to caress a woman's folds, opening and clit, to make her cum, to have my face flooded with her orgasmic nectar, is divine. Your story gave me some of that. Thanks.

What a wonderful story. No unneeded extra, while everything is lovely and exiting.