by likuwell
I quite like chastity stories, but man this was boring and nonsensical as to why he'd just willingly accept it.
Comments are pretty harsh around here lol. But atleast its something to work with. I enjoyed the overall story and scenes. Main thing I had an issue with was the pacing. It felt a bit too much like a chronological order of events being told at times. Since you're going first person might as well delve into the mind of your MC to mix it up some and add in some internal conflict. Anyways keep up the writing its always a long process lol.
Too funny for words. She gives him the bag, he heads for the restroom and then detours to their car. Going home he grabs a pair of household pliers and removes the cage. It's a toy you idiot. He then packs all her things in plastic garbage bags and by the time she gets home, he hands her all her stuff and throws her out. Time for a divorce. BTW do you know he can masturbate and ejaculate while wearing the cage? That he can have her arrested for putting him into the cage? That he can have a locksmith make him 20 keys? That a pair of bolt cutters removes the lock in less then a minute? That a Dremel will turn the cage into pieces in nothing flat? That he can simply bitch slap her and take the key? She has no control, she's simply crazy. Stupid story.
If I was her I wouldn't use the cage as much of a bargaining tool. After all, it's just a toy
Idiot - the cage is easily removed without the key and a divorce is even easier.
how i wished she did bring home the other guy, so her husband would have to watch while in his panties and caged. hopefully, she will make her husband suck the guy's cock too.
Agree. Divorce for the disrespect. See how she likes it when the paychecks stop.
This is headed down the same ol power corrupts trail they always do. In no time she'll gave boyfriends and he'll be suckin c**k taking it up the a$$, etc. etc.