All Comments on 'The Cockpig Ch. 04'

An interesting story, but you didn't keep track of what was happening. The sub is sent home naked but then has to strip. The same is true of the opening bed scene.

I suppose the story is complete?

Sumacandlvy, you didn't read ght wwhere he's made to go back in his red spandez shorts for starters... how can you critique not keeping track and do it yourself?

Other than that I loved the story and would love an epilogue of sorts to know of Pig's new life