All Comments on 'The College Bet'

Holy shit, so good. More please!

In part 2 we find Violet hypnotized Jack into thinking he hypnotized Violet

Not putting "Ch. 1" on the first part of your stories is a dishonest trick.

This was amazing can't wait for the next chapter!

This is everything I look for in a hypnosis story. Well done!

Haha, loved the plot twist! Looking forward to more, though the fish is hooked already. Also the foot kissing was unusual because the sub was in charge, supposedly.

Fantastic!!!

Can’t wait for Jack to do more with his sister. Then his mom needs a good lesson for letting Violet pulled her shit all these years. Of course Chloe needs to owes Jack an awful lot for her friendzone games. Plus the twins…

Such an excellent build up I hope the story continues

Great story hope Chloe gets to use Violet as her slave too!

Great! Really looking forwards to more!

Jack Daniels, really?

Looking forward to part 2! Know when it will drop?

Very nice.

Excellent story. Waiting for the next part

Good start, please keep going

Will be looking for the next part hoping it is soon.

Great!!!!!!

What hell of a waste of a great start to, would could have been a great story. Just have to mark the story up to another waste of time to read, couple more chapters could have really finished out the story. Like did he get the house next year, or did he get to date Choe, did did he fuck his slutty sister??

Fun story! Any chance of a part two?