All Comments on 'The College Girl Next Door'

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MikeOrMikeyMikeOrMikeyover 1 year ago

Please continue with this.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Good premise.

But sex was so automatic. So rushed.

Needed to slow down, and then slow down some more.

Needed tension.

Needed dialog about what they were doing to each other. And how it felt to her. And to him.

Sex almost boring.

Three stars.

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