All Comments on 'The College Library Gloryhole'

by HotchkissRoyale

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AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Superb

MigbirdMigbird4 months ago

Got to like this piece for its unusualness; maybe even intrigue, but in end comes off predictable and not particularly erotic. Potential not realized.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

This was amazing and needs a follow up

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Please write more. Your stories are excellent. Great character development. Quirky twists. I have become a fan. Thank you.

Baldeagle58Baldeagle583 months ago

This needs a second chapter……

Maybe have Brenna “studying” in the Dungeon, waiting her chance to sneak into the glory hole, when she sees Doreen Clark come out with a “cat’s got the cream” (or cum) smile on her face.

Their eyes meet, and Doreen knows she’s been busted.

What happens next?

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I like your writing but I don't like that there are no normal main characters in your stories. I don't relate at all.

aherbaherb2 months ago

Loved this. Very well written and well paced. I think/hope that there is much more of Brenna's story to come.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Great story. I liked Brenna, some very nice characterization there. Another chapter or episode would be very welcome.

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