by HotchkissRoyale
Got to like this piece for its unusualness; maybe even intrigue, but in end comes off predictable and not particularly erotic. Potential not realized.
Please write more. Your stories are excellent. Great character development. Quirky twists. I have become a fan. Thank you.
This needs a second chapter……
Maybe have Brenna “studying” in the Dungeon, waiting her chance to sneak into the glory hole, when she sees Doreen Clark come out with a “cat’s got the cream” (or cum) smile on her face.
Their eyes meet, and Doreen knows she’s been busted.
What happens next?
I like your writing but I don't like that there are no normal main characters in your stories. I don't relate at all.
Loved this. Very well written and well paced. I think/hope that there is much more of Brenna's story to come.
Great story. I liked Brenna, some very nice characterization there. Another chapter or episode would be very welcome.