by ENF_Asian
Anyone have any feedback for me? Should I keep going with the series?
Will do, I'm about half way through the next part. I just wanted to know what people thought. Any critique?
ofcoz you should going on with this series. i just read this story few days ago and really2 like it.
yumi really2 a naive, good & sexy girl.
is there gonna be any other girl that being "punish/hired/owned" by the school??
hope some bitch that you already mentions in these stories also got "hired" at some time thou
(seems this school have more female than male isnt it??)
I just love this series. Your thoughts are so clear, and the whole humiliation part is so so hot. Please carry on with the great work.
I have just one suggestion. There are many details that I feel you are cutting off.... Like Yumi going almost naked from Dean's office to anatomy class, and she didn't come across any student? How was she treated? Then again....wouldn't a bunch of 19-year old horny students abuse and enjoy Yumi a lot? Didn't find much details of that either. I don't know if you are skipping things like these to keep the stories short. But I feel they would make your story just.......... AMAZING :)
It is a great story. The humiliation is great!!!! You really know how to build up the story. Please don't stop. I hope you think of another story line and keep writing
First of all, thanks very much for your feedback! I will continue, and the part I'm writing now I do talk about her journey to the class, but I'll fill it out a little more. I might go back and edit the previous stories to include some of this as well. I guess I'm skipping some of it because I just wanted to focus on the humiliation in class. I'm glad you want to know everything about my lovely Yumi including the parts in between her classes :)
ENF, sent you some feedback already, I hope it was helpful. I see the next part is up. You are quite prolific.
The matter of fact, clinical manner of Dr Goodman was a masterstroke to highlight Yumi's urination and orgasmis response. The poor assistant becoming more and more enmeshed in her carefully manipulated sex drive. I love that she has come to rejoice in being exhibited and disply her lewdness. My mouth waters at the depraved slut she is becoming