All Comments on 'The Commando and the Call Girl Pt. 02'

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Adonisblack1Adonisblack1almost 2 years agoAuthor

Correction. On the last page at the bottom, there’s a part that reads “Aaron/Chet”. It should be Austin/Chet. Sorry for the mistake.

Wildbill314Wildbill314almost 2 years ago

Can anyone say “confusion”.?

Adonisblack1Adonisblack1almost 2 years agoAuthor

Care to explain? I mean, I don’t mind criticism. But what do you mean?

Adonisblack1Adonisblack1almost 2 years agoAuthor

Working on part 3

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Loving the story keep up the great work

Adonisblack1Adonisblack1almost 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you for the kind words. Working on Part three now

AguniAgunialmost 2 years ago

I'm a little disappointed with this being tagged under "interracial". I feel like that should go over stories that actually have it as the pairing focus, as opposed to all of your stories, which always seem to boil down to a black couple. Occasionally interracial sex happens, sometimes. I think it's kind of misleading.

This has nothing to do with the story though, which is fun. Just thought I'd point that out.

Adonisblack1Adonisblack1almost 2 years agoAuthor

Aguni, thanks for the feedback. I’ll definitely be more cautious of that in the future. That was very helpful criticism

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