All Comments on 'The Construction Crew'

An interesting story, but the plot is unrealistic. However, this is fiction and the author has a writer's license. The writing was okay, and the internal dialogue of the Construction Crew was honest and clear. The long sex scene could have been written better, but having sex with 15 females, some of whom were probably married, was over the top. Even drunk out of their minds females would be less than willing to enjoy blow jobs, and cunnilingus, especially in front of an audience. Interesting, but not my cup of tea/cum.