All Comments on 'The Consummation'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Loved it

Very good !

PhilD13PhilD13about 12 years ago
Very well done all the way through

Nicely written, very descriptive without being over the top. Sensual and erotic, from both male and female points of view. Will look for more from you!

danigrl84danigrl84over 12 years ago
Great story.

Very descriptive. Hope to hear more from you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Veeeeeeeery nice. :D

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