All Comments on 'The Coquette'

Rapid burn,

I liked the way your story flowed so gently, so logical to it's eventual conclusion. You were very good on detail, also your descriptions were clear. It presented a sort of 'you are there' to the reader. Wonderful! Short but definitely sweet.

I enjoyed the confidence and self-assuredness from the main character's point of view, as if she were giving a documentary of herself to the reader. It would be interesting to see the same situation from her mark's point of view...

Coquette brings the battle of the sexes to a new level. The feminine arts, depicted in Coquette, present woman as the tigress, the temptress, and the seducer.