All Comments on 'The Corrupted Forest Ch. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

i liked it! :)

(secretly hoping viridis wins in this story)

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Loved it

negrodamu5negrodamu5over 4 years ago
errors

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He was way out of his liege here. League, liege is a synonym for king

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The burning around her neck made her scream out in agony, dripping to her knees. Dropping

The three women had been Viridis' savors way back when. Saviors? Did they save Viridis somehow? Or did she save them?

YshomatsuYshomatsuover 4 years agoAuthor

At least there are less errors this time =P hope you enjoyed it. And the last bit happened in Inquisition ch 6, they pulled Viridis away, bypassing the need to summon her into the world. They’re her handmaidens in a sense. Meridiana had stolen them and used them. So I guess In a sense it does work both ways

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Awesome

It was simply awesome buddy. Wish there is more sex between viridis n our hero🙂.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Awesome

Your simply the best writer on Literotica. Please keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Love your writing!

Please continue this story, love your writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Really really good! :) Was wondering if you're planning to continue Athan's storyline anytime soon?

YshomatsuYshomatsuover 4 years agoAuthor

Athan’s storyline on Lit is currently on hold because I have what’s happening to his soul being expanded with a chose your own adventure style Twine 2 html file. Since I can’t post that here it’s currently the only exclusive story on my patreon account. I have 5 full encounters written so far on it.

I do plan on continuing the Inquisition storyline I just don’t want to be jumping around the timeline and getting things mixed up at the moment.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

One of the best ever read in this category

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