All Comments on 'The Cougar and Me Ch. 05'

***Thanks for the read.

Well, well! You've developed an interesting ---, no, it's an intriguing --- story line that has expanded with surprising possibilities for growth and excitement. You've taken special care to develop the two major characters such that a reader can easily visualize them and their personas. I'm looking forward as you develop the plot and the lives of our two main actors. Thanks for the time and effort you took to give us an out-of-the-ordinary story.

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