All Comments on 'The Cougar Stalks Her Prey'

by TemptedOne

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
MORE!!

Please write a sequel!! This is so good!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Danger, man!

Be warned - playing away can be dangerous!

PsiberdreamingPsiberdreamingalmost 12 years ago
Great story!

Even though you always write about the same subject you know how to make each time different and not get trapped in a formula. Great job!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Addicted

That was a really enjoyable story T one. The best I have read on this site for a long time. I notice you have one other story but in view of the well written piece you;ve obviously written a lot before. Where can I find your works ?

watchurmanwatchurmanalmost 12 years ago
Amazingly Hot!

I'm a huge fan of this type of story and this is one of the best, seriously scorching!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Fantastic!

Good God....this genre rocks,and you just made the top 5. Great job.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Wow!

Reminds me of a psyco I hooked up with a few years ago while on Temporary Duty with the military! I loved the story as I often fatasize about my psyco while I'm with my wife. I can relate! Thanks, and Good Story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Well written, though the climax and end were too short. The delayed submission adds to the story. Great job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

very hot! one of my favourite story. please write more with the same theme as this one

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Great story

One of my favorites. I've read this one a few times, and i can't get enough of it. This is a story that should be considered for a short film. Anyways, please entertain us with another story just like this one, or give us a part 2.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
You'e kidding with the ending?

Marry the crazy woman? Did she boil the bunny? You're nuts. Sickening story.

BlacklipsBlacklipsalmost 11 years ago
Ending is so ridiculous

So absurd that its funny, I loled at the guys proposal, anyways it's a shame you don't write anymore cuz this is HOT

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Just terrible

That was the ending you came up with? Right up there with the worst decisions - EVER! Can I vote "zero"?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
people don't know what they're talking about

I loved the ending it was foreseen if you paid attention for the people who said the ending was horrible

oldtwitoldtwitabout 9 years ago
MMMMMMMM ?

MMMMMMM the plot (what there was of it) was much to quick it all happened to soon , she should have taken longer doing the dirty, taken more fun in the dead, made more of the wife friendship etc.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Why would he marry a crazy woman?

Which Veronica clearly is. It makes absolutely no sense. And no woman, bat shit crazy or not, wants another woman's ring. No way, no how. Absolutely stupid story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
to the other person commenting

A fantasy does not have to be realistic. It's a fantasy. And I assume you're a woman, aren't you? You clearly don't understand what a femme fatale is and that a lot of men are just simply vulnerable, dreaming of being wrapped around a finger like that, enslaved emotionally (kinda similar to subby men fantasising about being servants 24/7 and of being humiliated, although they'd never allow it IRL)

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

I have read this time n time again! More please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Best storie

this is the best storie i have read here on Literotica

ticklishsolesticklishsolesover 3 years ago
Excellent!

Very well written and I believe this story may have been based upon actual events. Oh to be the target of a cougar.

Ticklishsoles

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Cheat with a crazy woman believeable marry one you have to be kidding

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I remember one like this only longer and with the psycho getting in the wife’s wedding dress.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

my heart ache for sara🥲

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago
Lazy writing.

This story has divided opinions on content but why don't you write numbers?

Can you not spell two or three and have to write 2 of us or 3 of us?

If you're going to write then write.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Is this a joke? Please tell me it is

robertomalone47robertomalone475 months ago

Best stories i have ever read. I love she is a bitch.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

I want revenge to veronica & todd

Jack5225Jack52257 days ago

I thought it was going in the direction of a mind-control story! Not exactly!

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