All Comments on 'The Crash'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Part 2

I hope you will write a part 2. Love to read more about Mark and Evan.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Wow!

This is the story i loved in a long time. Keep writing. Expect a part 2 and maybe more.

whiteasianlvrwhiteasianlvrabout 4 years ago
Great Start

I lost my virginity to a younger man (an Asian) and loved the similar twist of a strong-minded younger man taking the lead in this story. I'm glad it ended so well but clearly there's much more to tell and hopefully more chapters in the making! Thanks for a beautiful story!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Great Story!!

Loved your story. It really was well-done. And the shower sex was hot. Then the surprise at the end was the "cherry on top." Hope another chapter follows. cp

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
I love this story

I think I've read it 5 times. Great ending.

lonelyheartVAlonelyheartVAalmost 4 years ago
We need part 2

That was good; keep writing.

catamitecatamiteover 3 years ago

Yes, I can see why this misadventure scored so high with so many. I suspect we haven't heard the last from these two.

Bluepoohstar08Bluepoohstar08over 2 years ago

would love to have more of their story.

DV19DV19almost 2 years ago

Great story!! I'm not alone in hoping for a chapter 2 and 3 !!

DV19

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Mark Andrew was born in Wollongong in Australia. He originally trained as a metallurgist and worked in the steelworks at Port Kembla. He now lives in Petersham in Sydney with his partner. In his youth he travelled extensively in India and fell in love with the country and the ...

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