All Comments on 'The Cruel Hand of Fate'

Narration is wonderful as per all your uploads. The story is fine for it's length, but for me I would have liked a stronger sexual element. She sounded excited at the end about the premise she had setup, so I'd like to think that, before sleep, she might have commanded him to bring his face down between her thighs. But I guess the author had some restraints and didn't want to mix their themes.

AMAZING!!!

Beautiful erotic story.