All Comments on 'The Cruise'

by Nikkiejanes

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SplitGeode66SplitGeode66about 2 years ago

I enjoyed the story, except for the abrupt "ending". Dropped my rating down to 4 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago
too short!

This is a wonderful story, sweet, tender, with excellent characters; romance story telling at its best. Unfortunately, it is much too short.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago
Seems more like an erotic coupling

than a romance. Still, five stars.

zooliciouszooliciousabout 2 years ago

The denouement was a buzz kill. Overall, still nice and hot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

What about a cruise with Izzy and Dani?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Not bad, but it all seemed rather "by the numbers" to me. And the ending didn't fit.

Rancher46Rancher46over 1 year ago

Whereas well written the end of the story ruined it for me. It was a 5 until the end, what can I say, each to his or her own as I agree with the last comment the ending just didn't fit.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Surprise ending but a very "proper" story!

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

For this reader, the story was not Romantic, just another empty erotic coupling.

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I'm mature and longtime happily married. I started to write erotic fiction in the begining of Feb 2018 after reading it for a few years on e-books, and thought I have enough ideas I could write like this,then found this site and a few others of the same so had the incentive to...