by Nikkiejanes
I enjoyed the story, except for the abrupt "ending". Dropped my rating down to 4 stars.
This is a wonderful story, sweet, tender, with excellent characters; romance story telling at its best. Unfortunately, it is much too short.
Not bad, but it all seemed rather "by the numbers" to me. And the ending didn't fit.
Whereas well written the end of the story ruined it for me. It was a 5 until the end, what can I say, each to his or her own as I agree with the last comment the ending just didn't fit.
For this reader, the story was not Romantic, just another empty erotic coupling.