All Comments on 'The Crush Pt. 01'

I like it very much. So far!

Love this, it's a great start. Hope he doesn't let Del cum too soo .

Looking very forward to the next chapter...

Loved the built up

Eh....it seemed a bit abusive towards the end. Don't get me wrong, the thought of a woman tasting her own cum is hot, but I'm not turned on by her being forced to do it. I had to take points away for the sadism. 3/5

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But on a separate note, I enjoyed the names of Delilah Finnigan's older siblings being in alphabetical order by age 😄 (Annie, Bevin, Collin, Delilah). I actually did this in real life with my own children. It didn't start out as a conscious plan. But after the birth of my second son, I realized what I had done by accident and it became an intentional plot thereafter. I was blessed with 4 sons. All of them have a first name starting with the letter 'J'. Their middle names in chronological order are Andrew, Benjamin, Carroll, and Davis. I never had any daughters, but my wife and I had a plan in place just the same. The first girl would have reverted back to the letter 'A' and been named Jessica Anne. Why Jessica? One of my favorite songs by the Allman Brothers. I'm twisted like that. lol

And I’m left wondering where this is going. It feels unfinished. Plus, Del’s submission seems rooted in her inner strength: she believes she is in control. Hard to believe she could maintain her act indefinitely.