by soflabbwlvr
hi agreat story hopethere will be more chapter coming soon can,t wait 4the next one enjoyed readin thank,s keep it up
An interesting read. Cant wait for more
Brilliant your story has great potential please continue. Two equally nasty protagonists and no silly simpering victims. I hope that you continue in this vein!
Steve UK
Oh, I must comment on the title as well; it's just marvelous and I love how it plays into the actual story.
But more so, I love the vibrant characters; they're so much fun! I love being able to see their motivations and where they are coming from; love being able to see why they would choose to do the things they did. They both asked for Hell, and per their own actions they're both going to get it.
This is one of the best struggles between wills that I've read in NonCon! Usually when it gets into blackmail, one of them caves completely, but the way you built these two up, I could not tell who was going to come out on top at the end. Choosing to close the story with an ambivalent and defiant "BRING IT!" was a masterstroke and completely in character. I don't really even need a continuation; the fall-out is going to suck for both of them, plain and simple, but we can imagine how it might've gone. :)
Wonderful story!
First, I agree about the title--it's what attracted me to the story in the first place. Also, being a BBW in her 50s myself, I really enjoyed the idea of Christine getting her jollies with a hot young man. I liked where you ended, because to me, what happens next is irrelevant. Thanks for giving me a great naughty chuckle!
Incredible non-consent fem-dom sequences. You write marvelous dominant women, and Christine is a goddess - a lusty powerhouse of mean-spirited desires, capable of taking any useless man down with her twin torpedoes and her mighty hips.
More please! Set the cunt free to rule over her subjects!
These characters are morons. He commits assault, battery, rape and sodomy and thinks that is simple retaliation? Epic stupidity. How this ever got a high score is beyond me.
1 star
That is the weirdest story I've read in a while, but strangely compelling--thanks!