by Bronzeapollo
It's a hot story, but her boyfriend would be way more suspicious and concerned over her admitted drug use. The hickey and her stretched cunt would also send off red flags. That side of the story makes little sense.
This reads like you're using an AI to write it. Not complaining, just do a better job proofreading and making sure little details make sense.
I think you need to study female anatomy. Also, 'gasping harshly as cum shot deep into her lungs'? Seriously?