All Comments on 'The Cure Ch. 01'

Rarely found a story this short that got to the point and produced a major curve ball (Gail having a daughter) at nearly the last minute. I usually prefer far more development, but I rated this as if it were 750-word based. Was that the jist?

I look forward to you developing this more and fleshing out why he's suffered such a dry spell and especially the particulars about Gail.

5/5 Very nice. I liked the Mom twist, felt realistic to me. Thanks for this one.

Wonderful! Captivating! Fucking erotic!

5 star erotic story with a humorous twist