All Comments on 'The Dancer'

Excellent descriptions. awesome writing

Liked the story. Please consider writing a chapter 2! Maybe Derek could come back to the studio!

A good buildup to a great session - need a follow up. You need to proof read, spell check won't pick up words like seamen, pecking or rune to name a few. Otherwise, a top yarn.

All young men should be involved with such a woman.

Good story. It would have been better if she were not so angry. And you need an editor