by Icecubez
Good story, nice random mystery element to keep everyone guessing. I for one will be happy to see the next episode..
(although I seem to remember the odd misspelling - there instead of their)
This was great, I'm just dying for the next installment...it's been over a month. I certainly hope you didn't abandon it!
Like I just said. A lot of potential there - looking forward to it.
I know this was posted a long time ago but I love to read more if it continues.